Life Is Beautiful
I look at U coming out of Honda City
A momentarily thought flashes (shamefully) that of self pity
I look at U, enjoying the Switzerland Beach-n-Beer noons
I curse "Filthy Bastards!! Born with Silver Spoons"
I look at U, entering the Taj, with the Lady in Red
I sigh every night, going all alone to my bed
Frustrated, anguished...I start looking the other way...
I look at U, shivering and covering yourself in the heavy rains
Your plight makes me forget my sufferings and pains
I look at U, counting your daily earnings with one hand
The same hand asks for pennies every morning at the Bus Stand
I look at U, getting beaten and caught
While stealing a bread packet from the nearby shop
I look at myself, look up to the blinding Sun and its rays
Smile, and think, "Strange are His ways!!"
PS:My 1st try at Poem ;-)) Veterans, pardon plz!!!
18 Comments:
Rachit tht was relly nice and thoughtful!!! am impressed!
Well... brilliant...!! is what i can say..!!
But being the true.. SOB that I am..!! I am going to comment on something
:D
Dont center align it... Please !!!
Cheers .. waiting for your second poem!!!
Suhas
Good piece of work..
Just make the "shift of perspective" clearer (The single line in the middle)
@saumya n suhas: by veterans in the last line i meant both of u specially :) thnx!!!
@saket: frustration was the shift of perspective
Rachit tht was relly nice and thoughtful!!! am impressed!
Doesn't look like a first attempt from any angle! And if it really is the first attempt, then we are eagerly looking fwd to the 2nd,3rd,4th,...
keep it up!
the 1st impression ws...bhai saab...too much hai ye to....prbbly experinced the same things in life...bt to watch them b4 my own eyes in words......gr8 effort dood......
masst hai :) !!
shekhar
Fundoo!!!!
Awesome!!!
Superb!!!!
(AH has forced me to write this.. :D)
fundoo dude!
Badhiya Hai bhai.... keep writing... this is the first time I visited I blog... I am glad I came at last.
Aapka
Abid
@abid
coming frm u th compliment..i m impressed!!!
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I just chanced to visit ur blog...thats a fantastic poem u have written....I will have to be a regular visitor now
thank u all :))))
Bhai Agla post kab dalega... Intezaar mein aankhen taras gayi...
Abid
Lovely work!! wat I liked was the brevity and teh depth..keep it up!
Mindblowing!!!...cudnt agree more & beautifully worded!!!......am looking foward to more of your works!!....i mean it
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